Tuesday, June 5, 2012

Visual Dare: Stuck

Well, here is my entry for the lovely Miss Angela Goff's 'Visual Dare' she hosts on her amazing blog.

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Why?  Why shouldn't I be allowed free?  I've been good.  I've taken this punishment with nothing but completely silent tolerance.  I've never left, even after all this time.  I've been staying in this prison, waiting until "the day".

Well, when will it come?!  I'm tired of this.  It's been more than I deserved.  I want to be again, to laugh again, to run.  This has gone on long enough.

I'll just free myself.  Why not?  Maybe they've forgotten.  If not then I suppose they'll just have to face me.

Now, what were the magic words?  Oh yes, "hold your breath".

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Let me know what you think! :)
 

4 comments:

  1. This is fantastic. :) I love that you could go anywhere with this story... it could be normal and okay or it could get really creepy.

    Last two lines were awesome. That is all. X)

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    1. oh thank you!! :) my brain has been twirling with continuation ideas... wah! :D

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  2. OH MY. Love this, MM! This is full of soooo many questions: punishment for what? For how long? How will she (he?) free himself? Holy cow this is great.....gotta know more!!!!

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    1. Thank you much!! :) I wanna try to incorporate it into my current project... somehow...

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